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Writing Feedback Cover Sheet 2: FINAL DRAFT

Name:

Bui Duc Huy

Student number:

L9938154

Class:

S61903G

Teachers:

Raymond Gustafson

Date:

1/5/2019

Word Count:

479

Click on the box to cross it

Changes I made after feedback:

I have used Arial.

Response - ideas

I have used font size 12

Organisation

I have double spaced

Grammar

Vocabulary

Student self – assessment:  Select Good OK or need to improve for each area

Response & Revision

Grammar

A full description

Good

Range of structures

Need to Improve

Used teacher feedback to improve

Good

Correct sentence structure, subject verb agreement and punctuation

OK

Structure & Planning

Vocabulary

Logically ordered, cohesive (linking words, pronouns)

OK

New vocabulary

OK

Made and followed a plan.

OK

Spelling & Word Forms

OK

I confirm this is my own work………………Bui Duc Huy………………………………


Bui Duc Huy

L9938154

S61903G

Cantho Library: How to Become a Hybrid Library

     Library is an ideal destination for Vietnamese pupils to enhance knowledge. Rewarding materials provide a vast amount of beneficial things to learners. Cantho public library is the most prominent library in the Mekong Delta. However, it also has many issues which create a negative impact on the quality of library because of the lack of investment. This report will analyze three weaknesses needing to be boosted in Cantho library.

     Firstly, Cantho library has remained unchanged outdated documents and problematic books over the past ten years, but it has many appropriate solutions to solve this problem easily. While many worldwide libraries are able to promote the quality of a large number of books annually, both technology and materials are completely out of date which do not satisfy Vietnamese student needs at the present time. Therefore, expanding digital learning is an essential solution to promote standards of learning in the era of technological advancement. After that, local students will have opportunities to borrow digital books or access foreign databases to enhance their knowledge more efficiently. This initiative is extremely necessary and plays an integral role to improve the Vietnamese library standards.

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